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Can someone proofread my essay?0Alexis (For bobpursley or Dr. Bob222)2012-10-07 03:59:13
First, I would like to take political heavily reinforced to deal with North Korea, the expansion of contacts between the two countries . The relationship between North and South is still weak . Although there have been important steps towards integration , in my view , is not to a sufficient amount . Nor thinking apart trustworthy, or feel the strong bond of blood that existed in the past , with the current trend of young people to think that unification is not needed. Far from feeling the race, the main reason to affirm the importance of the unification of North and South is located in the economic growth achieved by the united body . One of them , such as South Korea lack of natural resources , abundant resources of North America that remains intact is exceptionally attractive . Two , by combining the Korean Peninsula as a mass , and connect directly to fast-growing countries like China and Russia , Korea reached the central power through global trade issues .
Can someone please proofread my history essay?1Terry B2015-11-03 03:07:56
As a direct and proximate result of seven years of war were forced settler something to fight a common enemy . Britain acquired a lot of territory , and although Britain finally at peace
Could any native English speaker kindly proofread this?0Felipe2012-09-06 23:27:04
MedlinePlus Intercultural Melitopol MedlinePlus For about a year Melitopol has been participating in the international program organized by the Council of Europe and society "Democracy through Culture" . The aim of the project " Cities Interculture " is cooperation and trade of experiences between cities and countries around the world to _decide_ _ ( solved? ) _ Several national problems . MedlinePlus MedlinePlus _To Say_ _ ( Say ? ) _ , _ Been_ _HAS That Melitopol (was? ) _ From _ chosen ( among ? ) _ All cities of Ukraine as the most worthy _one_ _ ( ? ) _ , Is not an illusion . Definitely not all cities _gave_ _ ( introduced ? ) _ Application forms to participate _in_ _ ( ? ) _ The program " Interculture cities " . And naturally , Kiev has more nationalities than us. But , however
Essay help, please and thank you.?0JEFF2012-10-09 17:51:27
Compare and Contrast Essay MedlinePlus Religions MedlinePlus MedlinePlus How are the three great religions: Judaism, Christianity and Islam? Judaism, Christianity and Islam share many qualities, but they also have many differences. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Judaism, Christianity and Islam are very similar. For the three monotheistic religions, the origin is in the Middle East. Judaism, the oldest of the monotheistic religions is a common source of'' cousin'' religions, Islam and Christianity, which came relatively in the same period of time. These three religions came out of the cradle of civilization, an area known in advance due to heavy trade of goods and ideas that have occurred in the region. Furthermore, each religion has its own sacred text, every religion is reversible sacred texts like the prophets who supposedly talked to their gods and passed on the wisdom of God to the people. Therefore, every action in the history of the prophets and history of salvation based on the ideas of the Bronze Age and myths. Each religion reverence that Jerusalem is a holy city connected with God, also known as the city'' or'' principal'' City of God'', in any case, it is too sacred to religions. Many people come to visit the holy city to show their adoration and respect for their God. The three religions, but also have many differences, have led to major conflicts in history resulted in the deaths of millions of people. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus As monotheistic religions that share common ancestors, belief in mostly the same things such as prayer and charity, the three religions, Judaism, Christianity and Islam seems to be naturally occurring common with each other, although are many who believe in different gods. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus That right there is my essay. MedlinePlus and I do not know how to continue after the last section to write about them with different gods they believe in. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Could someone help me get on with the next setences more or less? and help me finish this trial stronger? MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Thank you. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus - Allyson
Essay help please! ................?0Perry2012-09-28 13:53:02
I have to write about aspects of the history of civil engineering ... This is what I have so far ... MedlinePlus Civil engineering can be defined as " the art of directing the great sources of power in nature for the use and convenience of man , as the means of production and of traffic in states , both for external and internal trade , as applied in the construction of roads , bridges , aqueducts , canals , river navigation and docks for internal relations and exchange , and the construction of ports, harbors , jetties , breakwaters and lighthouses, and in the art of navigation artificial energy trading purposes , and in the construction and application of machinery , and in the drainage of cities and towns . " Institution of Engineers in Civil original letter , 1828 MedlinePlus To summarize, I believe that the civil engineering profession is more important today
Can you help me with my 9th grade DBQ essay?0Marvlyn2012-09-14 15:53:03
Part A: MedlinePlus document based questions The following documents will help you understand the various ideas and contributions of the ancient Greeks and Romans . Examine each document carefully and answer the question or questions that follow each. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Document 1 : A philosopher
Please correct this essay.?0Sariah2012-09-24 04:25:03
Hello. This is Chan. I'm Korean. I tried to write this essay. Enlish'm learning and I think I made a lot of errors in the trial. Please correct your comment to me. Thank you very much. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus 40 years hence, what will happen in the world and in Korea? MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Unification of South Korea and North. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus South Korea and North Korea will take a country under a single authority. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus But the gap between the South and the North will be too far in the fields of language, culture, industry, economy, social system and so on. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Moreover, there are many foreigners in South Korea and already have formed a community. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Of course there will be some problems, including sometimes. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus North Korea is usually poor and difficult to adapt to capitalism. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Therefore, it can make people weak social. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus South Korea will also suffer the problem of sharing the wealth pie. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Successful launch of the manned spacecraft to the moon based on technology 100% Korean. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Korea is one of the highest technology in the world countries. He was in trade and economy. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Korea will sell a lot of cars, boats, submarines, aircraft, helicopters, all kinds of high-tech goods and household electronics such as a TV, laptop, PC, air conditioning, etc. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus The half life extension. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus 40 years so people live longer now. Medical technology will run much higher. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus People are going to extend the average length of life to 120 years. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Grandparents can also work, exercise and enjoy healthy life. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus The aging of society has begun, but the old man himself live as a community member. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus 40 years after
Is there anything I can do to improve on my essay?0Lex2012-08-06 20:20:03
I would like some advice and tips anyone can share . We're supposed to do an essay on steorotypes . And I chose to steorotypes of janitors. All help is greatly appreciated! :) Thank youu ! Working hard until the day and evening hours for little pay is a way to win a medal in some societies. Unfortunately , our society is not one of them. aren Caretakers
Can you please grade my essay?0Zackk2012-09-17 18:37:03
Give and you shall receive MedlinePlus MedlinePlus The whole world is in an economic recession, and every country has suffered the devastating effects. Here in the U.S., money has become stronger, fewer jobs, and food prices have risen considerably. However, as citizens of a surprisingly rich, industrialized nation, if we believe that our current situation is disappointingly unwelcome, then we would be very wrong. Not only be wrong, it would be very foolish lament for our lesser evils, when millions of people in Africa and Asia live - and sometimes die - in a state of perpetual poverty, in deplorable conditions. Some countries are rich and others poor terribly nicely .. Despite this, hope remains, and it is for this reason that the rich industrialized nations should adopt a policy that uses a variety of methods to share their wealth with the developing world, a policy that could have many beneficiaries. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus According to MilleniumProject commissioned by the United Nations, four million people live in poverty. Malaria and pneumonia, two diseases that are largely preventable and completely eradicated, seems to travel with the wind in places like Africa and Asia, killing millions of people every year. Moreover, (according to the UN) eight hundred million people go to bed hungry every night, unsure if they will live to see another sunrise, but knowing that if they do, still no food. In the midst of all this suffering, those who are lucky enough to get a spoon at dinner should not be difficult to access in their hearts to help those in need. In trade with countries that have this great need, we can jumpstart rich nations foreign economies and provide food, medicine, and peace of mind to those who need it most. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus It says that if there is, then he or she receives. Similarly, if a government is generous and magnanimous, get things in return. Many developing countries show economic promise, and are looking to be eligible for future business partners that can provide bona fide investment opportunities. For example, if the U.S. were to invest in Africa, a continent that, unknowingly, most investment considered a wasteland, refunds could be huge. Indeed, Africa is a land investment for longer. In fact, the 2007 AT Kearney Foreign Direct Investment (FDI) Confidence Index occupies fifteen emerging markets in Africa among the top twenty-five investment destinations in the world market. It is within these emerging markets where there is money to be made, between 1990 and 2005, private capital flows in ninety-four emerging markets increased from 25 to 300 billion dollars. However, careful planning is needed to ensure that capital is not intercepted by the corrupt heads of state and the like. Trade and aid should be reserved for governments introducing democratic behavior. In addition to facilitating the flow of money, wealth sharing to help the United States restore its global reputation, and also give allies for the future.
Which of these topics would be best in an essay?0Jason2012-08-09 21:34:02
I ? Feminism : How to make your life ? Global warming : what
What do you think of my UC Prompt #2 essay?0 ﹏ 1s. Black Tang herbicides? 2012-08-05 18:42:02
I'm applying to UC Merced very soon, I was wondering what improvements or comments you have on this. Martial arts is wrongly stigmatized as simply a physical activity no more profound than a Thigh-master. While it does engage in rigorous exercise, the depth of such training, however, extends far beyond it, emphasizing fitness of the mind in synonymy with the body. Those who judge it shallowly do not know what it is to be a martial artist; they do not see it from the inside as I do. As a child, I struggled in dealing with my parents divorce, not knowing why my life suddenly split into two very different pieces; why I was no longer a child of two parents, but rather a commodity traded between houses. Outbursts of frustration became regular when I could not appropriately convey my confusion. 'The office', the dreaded place of every elementary school child's nightmares, became a regular destination. I had few friends, little self-control, and most tragic of all, a deficit of self-respect. My life was without direction, but all this changed at Mountain Storm Jujitsu. The first day, I walked in loud and unruly, like other places, not paying proper respect to the studio. Class was already in session by 5 minutes or so. Mere seconds from the moment the door had shut, the door to the rest of my life opened. The Sensei, meaning teacher in Japanese, walked over and sternly stared me in the face, yelling at me in perfect silence. Though only a man of 5'4
Is there anything I can do to improve on my essay? ?0dabf2012-08-03 23:44:50
I would love any advice and tips anyone could share. We're supposed to make an essay on steorotypes. And I chose to do steorotypes on janitors. All help is greatly appreciated! :) thank youu! Working strenuously through day and night hours for little payment is a way to earn a medal in some societies. Unfortunately, our society is not one of them. Janitors aren

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