Please correct this essay.?

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Sariah
Asked at 2012-09-24 04:25:03
Hello. This is Chan. I'm Korean. I tried to write this essay. Enlish'm learning and I think I made a lot of errors in the trial. Please correct your comment to me. Thank you very much. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus 40 years hence, what will happen in the world and in Korea? MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Unification of South Korea and North. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus South Korea and North Korea will take a country under a single authority. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus But the gap between the South and the North will be too far in the fields of language, culture, industry, economy, social system and so on. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Moreover, there are many foreigners in South Korea and already have formed a community. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Of course there will be some problems, including sometimes. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus North Korea is usually poor and difficult to adapt to capitalism. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Therefore, it can make people weak social. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus South Korea will also suffer the problem of sharing the wealth pie. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Successful launch of the manned spacecraft to the moon based on technology 100% Korean. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Korea is one of the highest technology in the world countries. He was in trade and economy. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Korea will sell a lot of cars, boats, submarines, aircraft, helicopters, all kinds of high-tech goods and household electronics such as a TV, laptop, PC, air conditioning, etc. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus The half life extension. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus 40 years so people live longer now. Medical technology will run much higher. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus People are going to extend the average length of life to 120 years. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Grandparents can also work, exercise and enjoy healthy life. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus The aging of society has begun, but the old man himself live as a community member. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus 40 years after
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